Comments on: Favorite food moment http://sunwick.wordpress.com/2008/05/07/favorite-food-moment/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Thu, 19 Jun 2008 01:08:30 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Duly http://sunwick.wordpress.com/2008/05/07/favorite-food-moment/#comment-199 Duly Thu, 19 Jun 2008 01:08:30 +0000 http://sunwick.wordpress.com/?p=87#comment-199 Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway ... nice blog to visit. cheers, Duly. Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway … nice blog to visit.

cheers, Duly.

]]> By: kylemh http://sunwick.wordpress.com/2008/05/07/favorite-food-moment/#comment-151 kylemh Wed, 07 May 2008 21:40:41 +0000 http://sunwick.wordpress.com/?p=87#comment-151 Alicia - Some of the imagery in this poem works really well: "savoured past" and "a prior favorite, stirred up again". The poem is pretty evocative with all the time references - I wonder what would happen if you gave it more structure. Really tightening up the syllables, line breaks and punctuation might make the reader connect with the food/memory even more strongly. Just a thought. See you tonight Alicia –
Some of the imagery in this poem works really well: “savoured past” and “a prior favorite, stirred up again”. The poem is pretty evocative with all the time references – I wonder what would happen if you gave it more structure. Really tightening up the syllables, line breaks and punctuation might make the reader connect with the food/memory even more strongly. Just a thought. See you tonight

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